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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2008-11-27 01:38 PM


Time has left and I not dead
can’t catch a passing cloud
and fly unhindered backwards
to what was left behind.

And it’s not as if the clouds
know the way back to desire
for they hang immobile overhead
and blanket every living thing
with a stubborn “now”.

So in the way a woman does
I search here on the ground
for a vehicle with an engine, wheels,
to fully turn me round
from where I’m standing now.

But lucky ladies all are we
who know to flutter eyelids
and tempt the now with just rewards
for all the goodness shown
for in that manner backward looks
become as tools unused.

Hello “Now”!

Helen / 27 November 2008


© Copyright 2008 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-11-27 06:37 PM


Hello "Now", sounds good to my ears, dear Helen! Well, it would be fun to travel in some sort of time machine backwards and forwards too, why not, just for a quick peek every now and then. They say it's all packed in the Now though, so we should be able to visit past and future without moving at all. Our brain is a wondrous tool that allows us to explore all there is ...

Love, dear Poetess.
Margherita

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2008-11-27 07:34 PM


I like that Helen~~ been thinking  the same:

Hello "Now"

M

LindsayP
Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
3 posted 2008-11-27 08:05 PM



Dear Helen, enjoyed your poem.

Love to you dear Lady.

Lindsay

steavenr
Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-11-27 09:34 PM


a lovely concept that transcends the present with 'now', and you have transversed that chasm so well...nice write


Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
5 posted 2008-11-28 02:11 PM


Whether we travel to the past, are in the present, or travel to the future ~ when we are there or here, we are experiencing "Now". ~ at least I think (which all your philosophical poems make me do!) we are!

Love to you in the past, present, and future!

Linda

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