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The Window Cleaners
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The Window Cleaners |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria 
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The Window Cleaners Their pails were ready but the blinds were drawn So the two cleaners lingered there still, One thought of a ten dollar bet he’d made And the other a dream to fulfill. It was their first job at this fancy hotel Where honeymooners were happy to stay, They’d heard about many incredible sights And with some luck they might see some today. The previous cleaners had told many a tale, There were some that might make you blush For many newly weds had stayed in this pub For everything was so modern and plush. They decided to start, up on the third floor And put their ladders up on the wall, Then slowly & quietly they ascended the steps With thoughts that could only appall. Someone had finally pulled up the blind, They thought that now they’d be back on the bed, Then slowly expectant, they peeped over the sill, What they saw was much better unsaid. It made the mind boggle to see what they saw, It was something that would blow you away, Instead of a beautiful new married bride What they seen was a couple of gays. Lindsay Wilson |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh dear, Lindsay! How unPC. You made me laugh because I could just see these two perverted window cleaners plotting ... but, instead, they become the butt of a joke! sheese, poor guys. A |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you have an amazing way of pointing...always a fresh take on an unexpected occurrence...shame on me (I think) |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
Chuckles.. You have an awesome talent.. thank you for sharing this with me,smiles.. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
LOL!!! oh Lindsay! you are wonderful with your stories!! I love them so much! love and hugs RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
LindsayP - H'aaaaaa, I couldn't wait to get to the end of the poem to see what happened, what a nice different ending than what was expected... Happy Thanksgiving, BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Window cleaners have caught me in a compromising situation before!!! ~ No, I wasn't having a fun time! lol It was a hot summer's day and I was stretched out naked on my bed having a nap! LP ~ I love your sense of humour! ~ and it often has a naughty bent ~ and I like that!  Love you, my dear Aussie Man! Linda |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Lindsay, enjoyed the build up of this my friend, you do tell stories and give us all a smile. Have a good day Lindsay and enjoy. Rick |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
 Thanks, Lindsay! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
To my very good friends, Alison, Steav' , Pantheress, Roniece, Bill, Linda, Rick and Helen, how would I get on without all you wonderful people to enjoy my poems and respond the way you do. Thank you, thank you. And Linda let me know when you want your windows cleaned again. Lindsay |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I love this!!!!!!! WOW! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Thank you my friend, I'm glad you liked it take care. Lindsay |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
hahaha...its funny and vivid in description...with rhythm. Very much enjoyed |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
FNG I'm glad you had a laugh. Thanks for the reply. Lindsay |
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