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viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2008-11-25 07:05 PM



How am I ever going to be a hero?
I have no asteroid
no natural or non-natural disaster
to give people a reason
for cheering my name.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-11-25 07:23 PM


Paul,

Work on being a hero.

People don't cheer disasters.

Nice little poem.

Bobby


viking_metal
Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
2 posted 2008-11-25 07:54 PM


People cheer people

that stop disasters.

Fanks man.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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