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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-11-25 01:53 PM



it was unintentional like the storms
and the sand of small towns
that mark your bare feet sometimes
when you try to leave in your mind

we spoke of abandon and other things
like they were jewelry we both wore
for different reasons without reason
and you said it made you think things

perhaps the shuddering of the same pacific
touching our shoulders with whispers
or the other touching we didn't mention
but recognized as laughter on windows

and love words written in smile side saliva


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daark



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steavenr
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1 posted 2008-11-25 02:34 PM


"like they were jewelry we both wore"

I love how you can always find a jewel in your words...this phrase was so cool...never disappointed

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-11-25 02:40 PM


steavenr, thanks amigo!!
Indigo
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3 posted 2008-11-25 03:51 PM


wrist dreams bound tightly,
the ribbon of 101
curves against my skin.

Indigo

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-11-25 05:46 PM


quote:
it was unintentional like the storms
and the sand of small towns
that mark your bare feet sometimes
when you try to leave in your mind



Dear D., you have this rare gift of unsurpassable creativity that brings smiles and admiration.


Margherita

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2008-11-25 06:45 PM


ms indi...you are so sexy in bindings...thanks babe


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ms mar, thanks lady for the soft smile eyes

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6 posted 2008-11-26 03:14 AM


D

And the Pacific brings those love words on its waves and in the winds that flow over the water - setting them gently on the sill to be savored.

A

Pantheress
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7 posted 2008-11-26 05:10 AM


Deep and dark, laced with class, I loved it.. Thanks for sharing this with me,smiles..
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2008-11-26 05:15 AM


just wonderful Mr Daark.. just you .. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-11-26 06:38 AM


ms ali-san...thanks babe


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ms pantheress, thank you lady friend
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ms r&b, thanks lady for the eyes

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