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November Redemption
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November Redemption |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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November Redemption As ominous storm clouds swallow a wan and timorous late-November moon, on this cold-heart night of exhausted thoughts and dissolute dreams that dispirit the lost and tangled mind… the very first snowflakes begin their tentative dance to blend with the whistling winter wind in a grand-visual symphony of the soul’s redemption. --- b. e. adams (11/24/08) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love the image of dancing snowflakes. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
There's a storm on the way here and this poem fits my mood perfectly. Today was a very gray day, the perfect day for homemade soup which I have cooking on the stove as I'm writing this in hopes that the soup, and the friends I invited over to help me eat it, will cheer us all up. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, this is truly magical, dear Bruce! Nothing brings more peaceful feelings into my heart than the silent, elegant dance of snowflakes. November Redemption indeed! Love, Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
sir, you have succeeded...this, too, was excellent in form and message...definitely on a roll...now, looking for more |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is a good one!!!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When mother nature dancings to any mood she is in ... it is always a wonder to behold. You see it and interpret it well. |
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