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Supposed bits of memories |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * Supposed bits of memories * She heard a strange knocking at her heart’s door and her mind wondered ... muffled sounds rising from love’s vessel made her hesitate. “I don’t want you to be memories yet” she said with a firm voice to cherished moments bidding entrance, “I want you to be my perpetual now”. Her heart then emitted such intense love vibes that the supposed bits of memories revived again into sparks lighting her current perceptivity. While she felt flooded with gratitude and joy, past, present and future blended into one. Her awareness of love became once again transparent and soothing, a magnificent soundtrack playing in the depth of her soul in the very now. * |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - I was very touched when I read this write, thank you... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really enjoyed reading this...James |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Beautiful expression Margherita. Thank you for these poetic thoughts. Love, Hal |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very sweet post dear Margherita a pleasure to read. Love Lindsay |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Ah.... the Margharita style, all your own. Ida |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
My dear friend ... Margherita ... as your habit you pour a gold on the papers i'll register my humble pass And withdraw quietly,,, i Leave all the meanings of admiration thank you Always look forward to the most beautiful Love Nourzihane |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh dear Margherita! this is so very very beautiful! love and hugs RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful and very, very interesting, Margherita! - Owl |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"“I don’t want you to be memories yet” she said with a firm voice to cherished moments bidding entrance, “I want you to be my perpetual now”." ...cool thoughts, beautifully expressed...always a pleasure to read your beautiful work... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
enjoyed my friend as I do all yours...picture was perfect too... j. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear Poet friends for the loving replies! Love, Margherita |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Wow! This is just beautiful. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely Write Margherita! ~ I really like the photo you picked!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dolphina the Cosmic Love Poetess reigns supreme!  "“I don’t want you to be memories yet” she said with a firm voice to cherished moments bidding entrance, “I want you to be my perpetual now”." ~ You have poetically voiced what I have experienced as well!  Angelo Terrestre |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
I don’t want you to be memories yet... A soft cry touches one's soul. You are again leads me somewhere serene... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I really enjoyed reading this and especially like the following .... ----------------------------------------- “I don’t want you to be memories yet” she said with a firm voice to cherished moments bidding entrance, “I want you to be my perpetual now”. ---------------------------------------- however I would take out the word "yet" as that is the only negative I can find and takes away from the "perpetual" now. Loved this one. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Sue, Michael, Linda, Vandana, Kushal and Mark, thank you so much for your loving comments. You warmed my heart. Dear Mark you are correct with your remark and I appreciate you for reading with enough attention to see the contradiction. I fear though that everything sooner or later will slip into the category of memories … oh no, I don’t want to think of it! Thank you again! Love, Margherita |
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