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Where is it that you stand?
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Where is it that you stand? |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Where is it that you stand? Forgotten, yet profound From whom do you take a hand? Those who push you down. What is it that you believe? Moral thoughts, thoughtful values Indecisive like the seas Made dizzy and left confused. How do you face the anger? Eyes filled with disgrace. Only Hypocrisy, is your danger. Sin you can't erase. When do you start to realize? Looking out, dispositioned Staring at those you dispies. Knowing they're right in their opinions. Who have you become? Going back and forth in your ways. Restraints almost undone. Is your life filled with evil days? Why does this amuse you? Is laughter your final escape From problems you try to disfuse? Yet still, an old good, will fade. "Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!" |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is really pretty good. I don't know how it got missed. I think it's very interesting and the writing is solid. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I like your work here Christine  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Thanks  I love pancakes!!! |
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