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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2008-11-24 10:11 AM



     
Artist: John Everett Millais

In Silence, I Weep
by Linda L. Dowd

I slide down silk tendrils of moonbeams,
And into thy sweet dreams of night.
I wrap thee in a gossamer rainbow,
~Woven strands of shimmering light.

Mine breath be the promise of roses,
Thou inhalest its perfumed imbue.
Mine touch be the caress of down feathers,
Soft kisses be the moist morning dew.

With the rise of full moon I do travel,
To lie by thy side whilst ye sleep.
Whispering mine love and sweet longing,
~But thy silence lends me to weep.


Love is the unifying force
which integrates one’s soul with another.
~ Linda L. Dowd

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© Copyright 2008 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
shortsleeves
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1 posted 2008-11-24 11:40 AM


A beautiful expression of connected awareness my dear.
Love,
Hal

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2 posted 2008-11-24 01:20 PM


Well, Linda, what can I say but "wonderful".  Unrequited love at its best - oh, perhaps "best" isn't the right word but you know what I mean.  Your heroin will stop crying and her love will be as if it never was.  She doesn't know that though.  She's just got to live through it.


Helen

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3 posted 2008-11-24 02:19 PM


"I slide down silk tendrils of moonbeams"...what a beautiful picture you paint here, and it only gets better...absolutely stunning write...always enjoy your craft...thank you for sharing
Oklahoma Rose
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4 posted 2008-11-24 04:41 PM


Very beautiful, Linda. As always!
Margherita
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5 posted 2008-11-24 05:56 PM


Ah, my dear Angelo Linda, this is so beautifully written and that last line really tugs at the heartstrings! A perceived illusion of separation ... I had to think of my Mom visiting while I sleep and dream ...

There is silence, but filled with love.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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6 posted 2008-11-24 06:13 PM


So beautiful and sad at once.
The pen writes the heart of your lovely ink

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2008-11-24 08:21 PM


Linda - a most adoring write, enjoyed this one, as I do all of yours...

BC

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8 posted 2008-11-24 09:22 PM


Wonderful writing...James
LindsayP
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9 posted 2008-11-24 11:14 PM




Mine breath be the promise of roses,
Thou inhalest its perfumed imbue.
Mine touch be the caress of down feathers,
Soft kisses be the moist morning dew.

Linda that is magic as only you can write it, so much enjoyed, love you.

Lindsay

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10 posted 2008-11-25 04:23 AM


Dear Linda

I stayed  long in your page
i don't know if my letter betried me
or my pen freezed from your strong pen

thank you for your words which left a special mark to us.

My respect
nourzihane

HopeS
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11 posted 2008-11-25 09:03 AM


So beutifully touching and heartfelt

Hope

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2008-11-25 09:34 AM


Yo dear Linda,

The idea behind this is good.  I’d avoid the use of archaic language.

Love Bobby

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13 posted 2008-11-26 03:09 AM


You have so much style, lady friend.  You write about emotion so beautifully.

Love,
Alison

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2008-11-27 11:12 AM


shortsleeves ~

Thank you, gracious Hal. You are very kind ~ and talented!!!

Love & a warm hug,
Linda

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2008-11-27 11:14 AM


Bunches ~

Hi, Honey! Yes, exactomondo! Wise words from
the Sweet One!

Loveya!
Linda

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2008-11-27 11:15 AM


steave ~

What a lovely reply. Thank you for your generous comments.


Linda

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17 posted 2008-11-27 11:17 AM


Oklahoma's Finest Rose ~

Greetings! "Beautiful" is a beautiful word
and I like beautiful things! Thank you, Beautiful!

Love 'n hugs,
Linda

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2008-11-27 11:20 AM


Margherita que bonita ~

My dear Dolphina, you certainly have a lovely
way of explaining things! ~ "A perceived illusion of separation" ~ You are wisdom and grace all wrapped up in one radiant soul.

Love you mucho!
Angelo Terrestre

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19 posted 2008-11-27 11:22 AM


Goddess ~

Merci, Michelle! That was very nice of you to say!

Big hug 'n smile,
Linda

Earth Angel
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20 posted 2008-11-27 11:23 AM


BC ~

Hi, Bill! I'm always pleased when you drop by for a visit! Have a great day!

Warm hug,
Linda

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2008-11-27 11:24 AM


James Michael ~

Howdy, Hawaii Man! I appreciate you saying so!

Aloha hugs,
Linda

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2008-11-27 11:27 AM


LindsayP ~

LP, my ever-faithful Aussie Man, your replies always make me smile. Thank you dear friend.

Love U 2,
Linda Lou

Earth Angel
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23 posted 2008-11-27 11:28 AM


Nourzihane ~

You truly are a sweet !!!

Love to you, my friend!
Linda

Earth Angel
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24 posted 2008-11-27 11:30 AM


Hi, Hope!

"So beutifully touching and heartfelt."

~ That is how I feel about your poetry!!!

It's nice to know that we have a meeting of the minds regarding each other's writing! lol

Love 'n hugs,
Linda

Earth Angel
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25 posted 2008-11-27 11:36 AM


Yo Bobby!

Thank you for you nice comments and your suggestion! I just went and read it again ~ this time without the use of archaic language and I do like the simplicity of it. Mind you, I feel the use of archaic language lends a touch of Renaissance romance to my love poem which is what I was attempting to convey.

Have a great day!

Linda

Earth Angel
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26 posted 2008-11-27 11:38 AM


Alison ~

I'm just one big ball of walking emotion! lol ~ so it's easy for me to write emotively!

Thanks, Sweetie!

Loveya!
Linda

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