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Sunday's story |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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And the universe bespoke the truth into the ears of womanhood but she who waited, dreamt, believed, thought wax into her ears and a sparkle into her blue eyes for all that they beheld. Her mind she pulled into these times and tied the reins around, around, the gate that once was open wide to the strange and mysterious. She tethered love to stakes of past and resolved the issues of her heart as a method, means, of walking tall until in death she’s humbled. Today the universe and her like two peas in a pod cuddle up and cry, bemoan, the fate of womanhood. But ‘tis a thing they know is done for time ran out on her and try as might the universe can’t return a conscious objector to the wait, dream, and belief. The universe will one day go to find another willing slave to hold and nurture love but she is done for love, you know, never called her name three times! Helen / 23 November 2008 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Helen, I could quite simply curl up and read your beautiful giftings all day.. this is just wonderful! love and hugs RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
 Hi Roniece! And I'd love to write them all day but sadly it's "Ho, Ho" times for me, i.e. back to work I've gone and will keep going ... until I don't anymore.Love Helen |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Helen, Wow kind of sums it up for me. A |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"And the universe bespoke the truth into the ears of womanhood" ~ Yeppers! Now if only men would listen to what we women have to say! lol I always enjoy reading your thoughts, Honey!  Linda |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Linda - I do believe in miracles but to get a man to listen to what a woman has to say ... no, I don't think it will ever happen. It would be nice to be proved wrong though. Helen |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Hi Alison! Yes, it sums it up for me too. Thanks! Helen |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Helen dear, when you find the right man he will listen, that's for sure. I wish you luck. Love. Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"Slave" isn't a concept coined by Universe, I think. Universe serves you instead, but it wants your clear indications of your most heartfelt, deeply cherished desires to provide you with what you are wishing for. If you think you are done with love ... universe writes that in its notebook . Well, you know of course!Fine Sunday story, offered to us in beautiful poetic form by your highly active mind. Dear Helen, enjoy this Sunday and write another story that will capture Universe's attention and ours too. Love, Margherita |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
There is that word "LOVE" again. Is there really any such thing? This is beautifully written. |
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