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shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-11-22 07:30 PM


I can feel your body slowly relax as you lay next to me.
The subtle warmth of your hand in mine,
I can feel the moment start to build.
I shift closer towards your chest
as you wrap your arms around my waist.
Your lips deep within my hair,
I can feel your soft breath
whisper its way into my heart.
The slow rising and falling
of your chest under my head
comforts me tonight;
it makes me feel safe.
Your arms still ‘round my waist,
your head moves downward and mine tilts up
just until our lips gently brush against each other.
That soft, subtle touch
suddenly turns into a deep rising passion
welling up inside us both.
There is no other place
I would rather be than here with you . . .
I love you.

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
1 posted 2008-11-22 07:32 PM


You have captured the sweetest of moments.  Wonderful rhythm...kat
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