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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2008-11-21 12:35 PM


Two Roses Of Red

© Copyright 2008 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2008-11-21 12:38 PM


Two roses
two hearts
one love

beautiful colors rise
with your words

Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2008-11-21 12:40 PM


Tis romance in the air of the blue pages and you convey it so well.  Beautifully illustrated in words and tone sir.  Take a bow.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2008-11-21 02:55 PM


A passionate and fine piece of romantic writing, Bill.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-11-21 07:05 PM


Wonderful...James
Oklahoma Rose
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5 posted 2008-11-21 10:31 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, Bill. Both, the picture and the poem.
Margherita
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6 posted 2008-11-22 01:40 AM


Dear Bill, what a sparkling presentation for this tender and passionate write.

A joy to read and savor.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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7 posted 2008-11-22 08:25 AM


there is some kind of beauty and hot here....thank you for the wonderful piece and lovely write....


regards

yann

steavenr
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8 posted 2008-11-22 02:58 PM


beautiful thoughts in beautiful words...simply lovely
Bill Charles
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9 posted 2008-11-22 06:02 PM


inkedgoddess - these words said from you touch me, thank you...

Mark - Your comments are deeply appreciated, and inspiring.

Midnitesun - I'm glad you stopped by, and thank you for a warm reply.

James - always nice to see your replies...

Margherita - I cherish your kind words, thank you...

2islander2 - I'm glad to see that you felt the beauty, and I thank you for your reply....

steavenr - You're vey kind with your reply, appreciate it...

BC


Sharon Rose
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10 posted 2008-11-22 11:42 PM


I always enjoy your poems, can't wait for the next one
amusemi
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A State of Disarray
11 posted 2008-11-23 12:12 PM


Stunning...as always.  You have a blessed romantic heart and she is one lucky lady!
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
12 posted 2008-11-23 02:42 PM


a lovely presentation Bill...
reminds me of my "Only One Rose" written so long ago

Only One Rose

Even though hot, as I sat, came a breeze.
The trees softly swaying in dance.
Wildflowers, sweet scents and roses in bloom,
Waiting their pick, if by chance
To be placed on buffet, with mirror behind,
Reflections of beauty in red.
Each time passing, thoughts rise in my mind
Of the first time these eyes had been fed,
With the bloom, one of love and the tenderness felt
When petals had opened at last.
Alone in it's holder of crystal and gold
A picture of splendor, it cast.
Just one lonely rose, so soft, yet intense,
To share with my eyes, splendid view.
Endearing and special when only one rose,
Came delivered to me, just from you.
M

ThisDiamond
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13 posted 2008-11-23 06:04 PM


You write of love's mystery with an experienced heart.  Petals soft, fragrance rare and words of gentle longing.

Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2008-11-23 06:09 PM


Yo Bill,

This is a very good romantic poem.  I wish I could write like that.

Bobby  

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
15 posted 2008-11-23 10:34 PM


amusemi - your kind words bring inspiration, as all here do. Not sure where the romance is lurking, but I love writing about her...

Maureen - a heart lonely once, yet intense, a rose came to me, and I was once again alive. Thank you for your beautiful reply...

ThisDiamond - your words are very gratifying, and kind. Thank you for coming by...

Bobby - thank you for reading this one. You will write like that, keep writing and let your heart guide your pen...

BC

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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16 posted 2008-11-24 05:09 AM


lovely Bill Charles.. you gift us with such beauty of your work.. enjoyed.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Pantheress
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17 posted 2008-11-24 08:39 AM


So beautifully you write.. I love your work, thank you
Sharon Rose
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18 posted 2008-11-27 12:33 PM


A rose says it all.love it, cherish it nourish it ,it yours. with all beauty comes thorns.
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