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What daydream brings
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What daydream brings |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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I play the world as bright and fun But see so many grays of day My questions seem to block the sun And then in thought I come to stay So often too much time to think Can be a curse that leads the mind To conjure what could seem the brink With only grayer shades to find Funny how we fool today With mind in game of dark and fine A flaw within does find a way To fill and pester sacred time But I have found my way to bliss Though world and fate will take my hand I live through dream and what I wish And worry not of where I land I paint the grays with colours bright And question less to find the sun Accept the dark and search the light To dream of joy when day is done For we are here just now with chance To venture and with life to play Though down at times I take a glance And find I’ve friends to love today So once again I say good day And tell myself of special things That come when drifting just away With daydream and the joy it brings [This message has been edited by Rick (11-20-2008 11:27 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"But I have found my way to bliss" ~ and your readers are thankful that you show the way for them as well!  Blessing of Love, Light, & Joy, Linda  |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Linda, lovely getting your heart filling reply my friend, thank you so much, take care and be well. Enjoy your day of bliss. Rick |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
Your poems are always so beautiful, This is such a happy poem, thank you for sharing this with me.. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
interesting voyage in good rhythm and nice rhymes...another good one and once again, enjoyed |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Pantheress, thank you for taking the time to read my words and reply my friend, great to share and recieve, appreciated. steavenr, great to get your reply my friend, enjoyed your comment and visit, thank you. Thank you both again and take care. Rick |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Inspirational write...makes me think of something I should address. Really great job! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
amusemi, great to see you here, I very much appreciated your reply my friend, thank you so much. Rick |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
For we are here just now with chance To venture and with life to play Though down at times I take a glance And find I’ve friends to love today Rick, I so love these lines! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, you are one of those friends and one I am lucky to have, thank you for your reply, as always it was enjoyed. Hope you had a wonderful day, take care. Rick |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed this, Rick. I'm a world class day dreamer myself. Ida |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Ida, great to have a daydream my friend, thank you for your visit, love to see you here. Rick |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rick - many good thoughts in this write, enjoyed it... BC |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Bill, thank you for coming in and relpying my friend, good to see you here. Rick |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"So once again I say good day And tell myself of special things" Yes, it's a very good thing to do as I've discovered of late. Enjoyed your words, Rick! Helen |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
For we are here just now with chance To venture and with life to play Though down at times I take a glance And find I’ve friends to love today That is a very good poem Rick and I also love that verse above, for you do have a lot of friends to love today. Thanks for sharing. Take care my friend. Lindsay |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Helen, thank you for your visit and reply my friend, we must all search for those special things. Take care. Lindsay my old mate, great to see you here, thank you for your time and reply, lovely you found the time and shared your words. Take care and a big hello to Norma and Rossie ok. To you both my friends, thank you again. Sincerely Rick |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
wooo...i enjoy this one. brings out the realities of everyday life without a hint of desperation |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
FNG, thank you so much for your reply my friend, very much appreciated. Rick |
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