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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2008-11-20 08:22 PM


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A year
From now . . .

All
I will
Remember

Of this conference
In Memphis

Golden pools
And waterfalls

Over slender shoulders


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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-11-20 08:35 PM


Yo John,

That's the right attitude.  Only remember the good things.

Bobby

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2008-11-21 11:33 AM


Lovely.  That was probably, without any cynicism, far more important than the conference.

- Owl

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2008-11-22 01:31 AM


Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
4 posted 2008-11-22 08:32 AM


delightful write, i liked the slender shoulders.


yann

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
5 posted 2008-11-22 09:00 PM


And what a lovely memory it will be.  Nicely done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2008-11-22 10:55 PM


v. well done!

serious applause!!

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