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ms robey
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since 2008-11-18
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davenport iowa

0 posted 2008-11-20 11:44 AM


Just because I thought of you I decided to write it down.
It seems as though it happens alot whenever you're not around.
Your smile your face your style and grace are some
things I truly adore.
And when you're gone and I'm all alone I seem to want you more.
So just remember when you're not with me and it seems I'm hard to find.
The love of your life is thinking of you cause you're constantly on my mind.

© Copyright 2008 tanya freeman robey - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

1 posted 2008-11-20 02:21 PM


Very sweet and beautiful written.

Eric

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
2 posted 2008-11-20 02:35 PM


That's warm and tender.  I like it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2008-11-20 04:53 PM


ms robey - very touching write about someone cared for a lot. Nice write...

BC

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-11-20 06:13 PM


sweet, reminiscent write...welcome to PiP...will surely be looking for more
HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia
5 posted 2008-11-21 03:32 AM


Beautifully expresed , I can relate , someone special is always on my mind

Hope

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