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GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

0 posted 2008-11-20 10:48 AM

I'm counting the seconds away, sitting with my head hung
I won't see my love 'til the finish of the day, after the bell has rung.
My head rattles with one thousand thoughts
All of a boy whose heart I have caught
I do not wish to return it, yet at sometime I must
For I know holding it hostage would surely be unjust.
From being in his presence, I gather he needs more;
More than my average face, or my existence I'm sure
God gave me the love of this amazing man and he'll take it from me
That's the way it always works and how it will always be.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2008-11-20 11:32 AM

You sound like a smitten kitten!

Personally, I would not want a man to
"take" my love but would rather he accept
the love that I may be offering and not
expected of me.

You appear to be a very sweet, sensitive young woman who is deserving of only the best.

Earth Angel
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GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

2 posted 2008-11-20 11:53 AM

Thanks! =]] and it's nice to be a smitten kitten lol.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2008-11-20 02:44 PM

I dunno, holding a hostage might be nice. I like this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Tony123
Junior Member

since 2008-11-20

Posts 10

4 posted 2008-11-20 02:58 PM

Love as a Hostage?

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2008-11-20 04:52 PM

GothicCherry - don't ever sit with your head hung. If it's mean to be it will be, if not, well then it won't. Nice write...

BC

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2008-11-20 06:11 PM

though it may be a little on the fatalistic side, sounds like 'hostage' may be leading the pack for an appropriate name...nice write, whatever you decide to call it

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

7 posted 2008-11-20 06:14 PM

Thanks, I'll keep that in mind the next time everything falls apart.

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

8 posted 2008-11-20 06:24 PM

I like that name.

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

9 posted 2008-11-21 07:07 PM

The first time i read it, i thought it was good, but i read a second time and a third and lets just say WOW!!!!!

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

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