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Open Poetry #43

Kiss Me

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2008-11-17 05:03 PM

Kiss me to madness
Kiss me oh kiss me again
Kiss me to shivers

Kiss me in sunlight
Kiss me in shimmering rain
KIss me as night falls

Kiss me with soft lips
Kiss me with your fingertips
Kiss me with your eyes

Kiss me oh kiss me
Kiss me til time fades away
Kiss me one more time

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

1 posted 2008-11-17 05:36 PM

The complexities of a kiss are often taken for granted. I see you appreciate this wonderful energy.
Thanks,
Hal

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-11-17 07:17 PM

A pleasure to read of the pleasures of a kiss...James

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-11-17 08:51 PM

Yo dear Paula Finn,

This poem makes good use of repetition.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2008-11-17 11:59 PM

Paula - kiss me under the moon. Enjoyed this one...

BC

AAB
Member

since 2008-04-10

Posts 99
Canada

5 posted 2008-11-18 10:05 PM

oh kisses, they say so much more then words. great write.

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