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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2008-11-17 06:16 AM



In my museum of life
I hope that there would be
Sufficient laughter to fill your day
Abundant smiles to keep you enchanted
Enough happiness to make you glad
Ample kindness when you need it
And love that continues on
With no cover charge


Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2008 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-11-17 07:50 AM


You have such a generous, altruistic heart, dear Roniece. Love this inspiration and I love how you rendered it.

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

amusemi
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A State of Disarray
2 posted 2008-11-17 07:57 AM


Sounds like the ideal place.  Beautiful sentiments and great write.  I lovee how you crafted it in a diamond shape...for a diamond of a friend.
Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
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Oklahoma USA
3 posted 2008-11-17 10:09 AM


Oh, I like this alot. I would love to go to your museum of life. And, I wouldn't want to leave, either.
nourzihane
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Algeria
4 posted 2008-11-17 11:22 AM


Dear Roniece

so nice

my respect

nourzihane

OwlSA
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5 posted 2008-11-17 11:35 AM


I, too, would visit your museum, Roniece.  Smiles.

- Owl

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2008-11-17 12:42 PM


Roniece Dawson-Bruce - yes, I also would be honored to visit your museum...

BC

Rick
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Victoria, Australia
7 posted 2008-11-17 01:24 PM


Just beautiful words Roniece, reflecting the beauty in your heart and presence. People around you are lucky to be as the days that you fill with kindness. Have a wonderful day my friend and take care. Very much enjoyed this.

Rick

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
8 posted 2008-11-17 01:33 PM


Yo dear RDB,

This is an excellent poem, well presented.

I like it a lot.

Love Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
9 posted 2008-11-17 06:23 PM


thank you so very much everyone... I was inspired by Yann's lovely poem.. my museum.. his of course has so much more to offer.. but I do thank you for reading this...love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2008-11-19 06:38 PM


Enjoyed...James
poddarku
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india
11 posted 2008-11-19 10:19 PM


In my museum of life you shall be kept and cared. Lovely poet you are!
Marchmadness
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12 posted 2008-11-19 10:24 PM


Lovely, Roniese. I can see why yann would inspire this special little poem.
                                 Ida

Pantheress
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Queensland, Australia
13 posted 2008-11-20 01:22 AM


Roniece you write so beautifully, beautiful people fill up with gentle loving kindness and it spills out in poetry,smiles..
Thank you for sharing this with me..

secondhanddreampoet
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14 posted 2008-11-22 08:16 AM


now there is a 'museum' I would like to visit!

applause for this fine 'penning'!

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
15 posted 2008-11-22 08:18 AM


Hi Roniece, it is so sweet to inspire a so beautiful poem, Thank you very much. I enjoyed the calligraphy of the poem.


yann

Honeybunch
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South Africa
16 posted 2008-11-22 05:02 PM


This is lovely, Roniece!  A museum most decidedly worth having.

Helen

jody5
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since 2005-12-21
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California, U.S.A.
17 posted 2008-11-22 05:17 PM


This is such a posative poem with such a cute twist at the end.  Loved it, Thank's for setting my afternoon to be a good feeling
Hugs Kimberly


steavenr
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18 posted 2008-11-22 05:28 PM


what a clever, inspiring write
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