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Open Poetry #43

ONE DRINK TO MANY

Sharon Rose
Member

since 2008-11-03

Posts 51

0 posted 2008-11-16 10:25 PM

I walked on clouds last night, the purest white.
I saw the stars that shone so bright.
I reached out and touched the moon.
I saw the MilkyWay in all it's bloom.
I flew thru the air with a gentle wind.
As someone spun my barstool, while I slowly sipped down my gin.

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

1 posted 2008-11-16 10:39 PM

Been there, done that...this brought quite a smie. Great piece.

nourzihane
Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

2 posted 2008-11-17 11:29 AM

Dear Sharon Rose

thank you for your poem it's very nice

Accept my pass

nourzihane

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2008-11-17 05:13 PM

Seems like I have sung that song a few times myself. Brought a smile to my face.

Pestillence
Junior Member

since 2008-09-03

Posts 25
England

4 posted 2008-11-17 05:19 PM

Heh this was a funny piece, I am sure we've all been there at some point, I was there all weekend

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

5 posted 2008-11-17 05:26 PM

Great work always rings a bell of truth.
Thank you,
Hal

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2008-11-18 12:12 PM

Sharon Rose - so that was the barstool I spun around the other night. Do accept my apology, but you did look really comical spinning round trying to hold onto that drink of gin...

BC

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