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Surrendering |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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As silence fades and the broken heals, the waiting of time journeys the mind. Every unturned page partners the thoughts, never knowing the next beneath it all. Words going separate ways, life spiced on the move; nothing is what it seems and seams still need to be patched... surrendering to life's storms. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
lovely -Juju |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - I enjoy reading your writings, always... BC |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
ah ::smiles:: (((nakdthoughts))) yes |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear M, Never surrender to life’s storms. They all pass away in time. Love Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"nothing is what it seems" ... no, typically it's only two or three times that bad! fine 'write!' |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
I liked this, The wording was very interesting, thank you for sharing,smiles.. |
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Sharon Rose Member
since 2008-11-03
Posts 51 |
There's always seams that need patching. Enjoyed your poem. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
m stiches hem those rips every day sweets h [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (11-17-2008 09:18 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you,Juju. I hope the world is treating you kindly.  Bill, thanks for the read and comment as always I appreciate the time you take to respond. XOx Uriah xOX ah thanks for the hug and smiles  Bobby, like Bones, I have to go with the flow and hope for the best  Bruce, I always know that you will understand my words...thanks Pantheress, my wording is often reversed or leaving the meaning up to the reader. Thank you for the visit. Sharon Rose, Welcome and thank you for stopping by Helen, your response made me smile~~ thanks M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
No white flags. just time to heal. then proceed forward. Very nice Ms. M! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Maureen I really like this one. I still have alot of those seams that need to be patched. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Well said indeed, life's storms leave us wondering what to wear out, the unknowing can be exciting though, life is really just an amazing journey, it is unfortunate that we just find the way to live it so late in life. Enjoy your day my friend, turn that page of mystery and savour the words. Rick |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
So what do we do? We get out our bike tire kits and start patching away, Maureen. This is a good one that you wrote. Hugs and smiles to you. Alison |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Susan, sometimes tomorrow is just like yesterday Sue, I sew, but my fingers are getting tired of patching ~~thanks Rick, well maybe it's not too late for me...I am still waiting for the "amazing" part Alison, can't go biking in the snow...guess I will have to wait for another Spring. Thank You |
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