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Sharon Rose
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since 2008-11-03
Posts 51


0 posted 2008-11-15 10:06 PM


        
  Within my heart a candle light.
  A brightness that lights the darkest night.
  Into the night a cold wind creeps.
  The candle light is put to sleep.

  

[This message has been edited by Sharon Rose (11-15-2008 11:09 PM).]

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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
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1 posted 2008-11-15 11:00 PM


Oh, nicely done. Just a note, it should be 'darkest' instead of 'darkess'.  Don't you hate typos?  I can read my poem through three times and still miss them.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
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2 posted 2008-11-16 04:50 AM


Thought provoking, Sharon. Enjoyed.
                            Ida

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2008-11-16 08:51 AM


Know that feeling~~

short but precise
M

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2008-11-16 03:10 PM


Sharon - yes, many have been there. Keep posting, I like your poetry...

BC

Pantheress
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since 2008-11-02
Posts 215
Queensland, Australia
5 posted 2008-11-16 07:54 PM


This is beautiful, I wish to send you a box of matches,smiles.. Take care of you and thanks for sharing this with me..
Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA
6 posted 2008-11-17 10:46 AM


You said so much in so few words. I sure know how that feels.
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