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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2008-11-15 11:43 AM


      

Snowflakes Cascading


Snowflakes cascading,
from dismal November skies.
~Winter is coming

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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2008-11-15 12:16 PM


Beautiful haiku.  Want to send some of those this way?  Would be nice to have a snowman on the beach.
Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-11-15 01:00 PM


Lovely haiku and picture.
                     Ida

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2008-11-15 02:35 PM


Artic Wind - the snowflake photo is excellent, and so are the words. No snow here as yet, but it's coming soon...

BC

shortsleeves
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4 posted 2008-11-15 02:45 PM


The changing structure of water is beautiful site as well as a wonderful metaphor...
Thanks for the remembrance.
Hal

Margherita
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5 posted 2008-11-15 02:51 PM


Michael, you make me long for the snowdance!

This is just so lovely, dear young poet friend!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2008-11-15 06:46 PM


In your element Artic Wind...
superb structure and soft, sentimental fall of word paint.

LindsayP
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7 posted 2008-11-15 08:05 PM



Great Haiku Mihael, you are very good at these, enjoyed.

Lindsay

steavenr
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8 posted 2008-11-16 12:41 PM


lovely form and content --nice picture too...enjoyed
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2008-11-16 02:32 AM


oh Michael this is so very beautiful in every way!! And although I so don't do Winter (or kitchens or camping for that matter!) I can appreciate the beauty of this beautifully written poem!    love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Alison
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10 posted 2008-11-22 10:21 PM


Very lovely, Michael.

A

secondhanddreampoet
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11 posted 2008-11-22 10:57 PM


Timely and effective imagery ... both poetics and graphics!

applause!!

Artic Wind
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12 posted 2008-12-03 12:52 PM


Mark!

Of course! ~~~

Thanks for clicking!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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13 posted 2008-12-03 12:53 PM


Marchmadness!

Thanks


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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14 posted 2008-12-03 12:53 PM


Bill Charles!

Thanks so much!!!!!!!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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15 posted 2008-12-03 12:54 PM


Short sleeves!

Thanks


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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16 posted 2008-12-03 12:54 PM


Margherita!

Thanks!!!!
I am so happy that you enjoyed

HAPPY WINTER!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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17 posted 2008-12-03 12:56 PM


TD!

I know!!! I love Winter, and this is my favorite season to write in!

Thanks for reading


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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18 posted 2008-12-03 12:56 PM


LindsayP!

Thanks!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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19 posted 2008-12-03 12:56 PM


Steavenr!

Thanks


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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20 posted 2008-12-03 12:57 PM


Roniece!

Hey!!! Thanks so much!!! I am so glad that you enjoyed it!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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21 posted 2008-12-03 12:57 PM


Alison!

Thanks


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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22 posted 2008-12-03 12:57 PM


SHDP!!!!

Thank you so much!!!


ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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23 posted 2008-12-03 02:57 PM


So lovely...

Yes, winter is coming and I look forward to your poems on that season. I love your nature writes as well as your fantasy ones. Actually, I have never read one of your poems that I did not adore!

Love,
EA

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24 posted 2008-12-04 03:59 PM


Beautiful work! *S* The picture and poem complement each other perfectly! *S*
Dark Star
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25 posted 2008-12-09 04:27 PM


Beautiful twinkles in the sky grey...



Robert E. Jordan
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26 posted 2008-12-09 04:53 PM


Yo Artic Wind,

Yes, winter is coming, and it's already cold.

Bobby

Artic Wind
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27 posted 2009-01-25 11:01 AM


Suthern!

WOW! thanks for replying, It means a lot!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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28 posted 2009-01-25 11:02 AM


Dark Star!

thanks


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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29 posted 2009-01-25 11:02 AM


EA~

Oh, Sorry I missed ya! Thank you so much!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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30 posted 2009-01-25 11:03 AM


Bobby!

Thanks so much!


ARCTIC WIND

Earl Brinkman
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31 posted 2010-05-18 09:02 PM


Winter has passed but a haiku remains of snowflakes falling from dismal November skies.  Sends a chill to me even in May!
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