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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2008-11-15 10:23 AM



Sidereal Breaths

Returning in cascades of aqua starlight
Intrinsic is the beacon that draws us
Moving into one space, electric in adherence
Heavenly, these bodies become fused
Curtains shiver, the result of gasps and sighs
Returning us to solar times
Murmurs in the moonlight
Perfect alignment strobes innocuous
Welling to flushed rose, sinking in deep green
Snow colored caresses of mind and soul
Giving, living and loving
Utter, visions reverberated holy
Before the sun

Copyright Kkh 11/15/08

© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-11-15 02:49 PM


quote:
Snow colored caresses of mind and soul
Giving, living and loving
Utter, visions reverberated holy
Before the sun



Kathleen, reading you means tapping into magic.

Love,
Margherita

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2008-11-15 03:51 PM


The influences of stargazing can open the mind to offer us many a journey.  Your words offer this in eloquent form.  Very much enjoyed as always and as always you expand the mind and the readers visions of thought.

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (11-15-2008 04:58 PM).]

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-11-15 03:52 PM


Now this is a beauty!!


ARCTIC WIND

shortsleeves
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since 2008-10-19
Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee
4 posted 2008-11-15 04:32 PM


Your expression of consciousness is a wonderful expansion of awareness.
Thank you Kathleen.
hal

Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20
Posts 392
Lost in your eyes
5 posted 2008-11-15 05:40 PM


=)
steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

6 posted 2008-11-16 08:48 PM


"Murmurs in the moonlight
Perfect alignment strobes innocuous"

so many good words in so many good ways...nicely done...always appreciate your word choices

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
7 posted 2008-11-16 09:32 PM


kathleen
every time i read you
you make the hair on the back of my neck stand up

your poetry is awesome

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