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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2008-11-15 12:31 PM


On the morrow,
I'll be sick.
The loan shark lurks
for interest.

And thus compelled
the tongue rebels
protesting
that which can't be
borrowed.


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Juju
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1 posted 2008-11-15 01:07 AM


Hmm Interesting

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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2 posted 2008-11-15 01:15 AM


Tick Tock
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2008-11-15 01:24 AM


Hugs, JuJu, and thanks for the look-see!

and Tick Tock, indeed!

Who'da thunk that just past the witching hour would become past my bedtime?

Love ya Shar!

Goodnite folks.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-11-15 06:54 AM


Karen.. you are beautiful and beautiful you write... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

viking_metal
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5 posted 2008-11-15 08:23 AM


I love this! Short, concise, no flaws, and it made me want to wait in the bushes for loan collectors with a potato gun...

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Huan Yi
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Waukegan
6 posted 2008-11-15 08:29 AM


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Karen

Good

John

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OwlSA
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7 posted 2008-11-15 10:43 AM


Oh, boy, do I understand the terror about owing!  I can imagine that your operation must have cost a fortune!

I am holding my breath for the end of the year when my regular bills will be up to date, and the end of February when I will be out of debt.

- Owl

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
8 posted 2008-11-15 12:24 PM


Wondering what the interest is on borrowed time ... ... ...

Not used to short readings from you but pleasure filled still is the read.

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2008-11-15 12:59 PM


Dear K, perhaps you could use your witchy powers to conjure up the dough!

~ Or a great big hook to catch the loan shark!

Hope this will help you out a bit ~ $$$$$$$$ ~ It may not be much but it is all that I have!


Linda

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2008-11-15 02:42 PM


serenity blaze - payment due, yikes... Well versed and to the point...

BC

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-11-15 03:51 PM


Dearest Karen,

I call upon this ancient power
on this mighty wicken hour
for my dear Karen to have her way
and get the money to have a successful day!
~*~

LOL this is my attempt for you to have an easy payment due day!!

**giggles**

to you Charmed one!
ARCTIC WIND

Dark Star
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12 posted 2008-11-15 05:38 PM


not my favourite time of the year, I will tell you that
serenity blaze
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13 posted 2008-11-16 05:01 PM


Thanks all for reading, and I confess, this is from an old one in the archives.

I've been trying to compile some of my stuff, but I hate everything. So I thought I found one verse in one poem that I liked, and um, no. I had to re-write that too.

so...thank you for your patience and encouragement yet again.

My love to all.


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