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No Exit |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. A small basement Hooded wooden bar With two stools On the wall A plastic sign For beer Showing Two horses One of them Man of War Dimly lit An old table For playing pool Country songs On the radio About cheating hearts And other unfaithful Non-particulars And some body Crying yelling Screaming At someone For nothing All the time . |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
can picture it all, John M |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, I try and stay out of places where they have country songs playing on the radio. Places like that drag me down. Bobby |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sounds like somebody's blueprint for Heaven was so misguided it became everybody's Hell. This ain't no "feel-good" poetry, but it's excellent. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all Happily I don't live there. I was lucky . . . Thanks again John . |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Good to hear :blinks: -Juju |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Juju Thanks Hope you're as fortunate John . |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Not my kind of place but I like the poem. Ida |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
 Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Not my kind of place either, especially because of the yelling, but I enjoyed looking through the window. - Owl |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Yes, a remembrance that still exists in consciousness. Thank you, Hal |
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