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Present Tense |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Present Tense The subtle fragrance of winter rain Feeds the recesses of sleeplessness Stilled in the fog, its arms around the moon Visibly a chilly embrace Yet there glows from within a pulsing light Ebbing in the throes of windy breath Wisdom born of fire, pure and unpretentious Tranquil and strong in this image Perceived as haunted hours Restless in my own sight Until realized, the hours pass My breath grows cold Hypnotic sways brush by So far I have traveled Coming back to you Copyright Kkh 11/14/08 |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Always enjoy the nuances of your poetry and this line -------------------------------------- Stilled in the fog, its arms around the moon -------------------------------------- begs to be remembered. Enjoyed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Some fine imagery, Kathleen. I also liked the line Mark highlighted. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
yes indeed, more fine imagery ... and what a grand beginning!: "The subtle fragrance of winter rain Feeds the recesses of sleeplessness Stilled in the fog, its arms around the moon ... a chilly embrace..." serious applause! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely, eloquent write, Kathleen. Ida |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kathleen - nicely written with many visions when I read the words... BC |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lovely, Kathleen. A |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Kathleen, this is so beautiful. You are a wonderful poetess. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
a lovely write...filled with beautiful word images...thank you for sharing...enjoyed once again |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
life is a circle |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautifully Written! ~Yes indeed, Life is an circle!  ARCTIC WIND |
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