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CrazyHorse
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since 2008-08-23
Posts 31
New-Brunswick, Canada

0 posted 2008-11-13 04:37 PM


My Heart and I
We are calling out to You
“Listen up, Life
We are Here
We are Waiting
We are Longing
We are not where we Are
If we were, we would not be calling for You”

My Heart and I
We are desperate for You
“Listen up, Love
We are Empty
We are Without
We are Lonely
We are as we say we Are
If we weren’t, we would not be desperate for You”

My Heart and I
We Understand You
“Listen up, Guilt
We are One
We are Compatible
We are Mirrored
We are part of what we say we Are
If we weren’t, we wouldn’t understand Guilt as You do”

My Heart and I
We love You
“Listen up, Freedom
We are Close
We are Reaching
We are Waiting
We are working as hard as we say were Are
If we weren’t, we would have given up on You”

[This message has been edited by CrazyHorse (11-13-2008 07:24 PM).]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-11-13 06:06 PM


So good that you have not given up yet!

Beautiful call from heart to heart.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-11-13 06:10 PM


"Love", "listen", "reach", "longing", "understanding", "waiting"...

And all will be rewarded!


EA

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2008-11-14 06:05 PM


Oh I really like this...truly this is so lovely
Pantheress
Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215
Queensland, Australia
4 posted 2008-11-14 08:48 PM


Thank you for the hymn and sharing this with me,smiles..
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