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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Do you remember Summer girl San Francisco How walking Down First and Main You had the whole town Eating out of your hand The sun Over the bay The sea and sky Ever so blue How though The eye knew better There always seemed to be Flowers in your hair . |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I remember the masts and the breeze. And sitting on a curb, and an old man offering me a drink from a brown paper bag. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
Just want to tell you I really like this poem. poetry podcasts, blogs and photopoems at URL= http://anthonyarmstrong.ca |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I stand corrected. Not only did I understand this but I smiled as if the memory were mine. Sometimes that is all we get. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Excellent 'slice out of time' impression! serious and sustained applause!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is a beautiful moment in time, John. Ida |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Oh, how memories flood back to a time of my youth. Thank you for this and allowing me to sit and stare out my window remembering ... ooxx Marti p.s. I do love your poetry. I don't always understand some of it, but it makes no matter. |
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