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Pantheress
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since 2008-11-02
Posts 215
Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2008-11-13 07:43 AM



Lets join piptalk dot com.
I hope the washing
doesn't need to be done.
I stroll through the pages.
I read with delight,
The sad, the lonely,
the happy and bright.
I read of bone's sorry plight.

Lets join piptalk dot com
Its a poets dream come to light.
I think just one more,
then I must call it a night.
Then I spy a poet I liked.
Just a quick read,
Then I'll honestly turn in.
My head grows heavy,
My eyes burn bright.
I collapse in my bed.
With the poems in my head.
Thinking..
What is trying to be said?
In the poems that I've read.

Quickly the morning comes.
The chores need to be done.
I find myself working,
Thinking.. What will they write?
Will it be happy, intense or blue.
The moon, the leaves,
Autumn or November grey
and the lack of discipline today.

Lets join piptalk dot com.
Is this an affliction
or just pure addiction?
Please help me..
The washing, the ironing
are calling my name..
But piptalk dot com
lays first claim.
The emotions I feel
As I read through the pages..

Lets join piptalk dot com.
Minds so intelligent.
Hearts strong as steel,
wrapped in cotton candy.
With poets like Roniece Dawson-Bruce,
my senses they seduced.
I'm sure SEA shutters when I'm near,
her giving so sincere..
Its a secret! so try not to share..
I couldn't find the email link.
I know I've just become a glutton,
Lets join piptalk dot com
Your work may not get done.
Dishes remain in the sink.
But Gee.. You'll sure have fun.
Now that's another silly poem done..

Sorry guys and girls..
I was trying to be good..
But the Devil made me do it,smiles..


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-11-13 08:11 AM


What a fun read, dear Pantheress.

Welcome to Pip!

I love the lightness in this.

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2008-11-13 10:50 AM


Boy, do you have it bad.
But although we can be contagious
at least we don't allow you to itch long...

because tomorrow always brings another posting,
another reading, another longing...
another toasting!




SEA
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Posts 22676
with you
3 posted 2008-11-13 11:19 AM


you know it's really a lot of fun to read you, and to remember feeling that way. I was so excited when I found pip I could not get off the computer! This really is a fun place, with such great people. I think you fit right in
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2008-11-13 12:44 PM


Cute poem, Pantheress, First thing I do every morning...check the site.
                             Ida

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2008-11-13 02:13 PM


so many of us can relate to this dilemma!
Many times the dishes sat soaking in the sink till the next day, because there were just too many goodies on the blue screen.
Thank you for the much needed smile.
(Love your pen name.)

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
6 posted 2008-11-13 05:30 PM


ah Pantheress this is another wonderful write!  Thanks so much for the laughter .. have a great day!

love
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
7 posted 2008-11-13 05:38 PM


Yo dear Pantheress,

Bones says hello.

Love Bobby

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
8 posted 2008-11-13 06:15 PM


"Is this an affliction
or just pure addiction?"

~ M'dear, it is "pure addiction"!!! ~ and like so many of we fellow pipsters, it's our
drug of choice!

I enjoyed your thoughts ~ and identified with them ~totally! Now I best get to those "dishes" that are piling up! lol


EA

Pantheress
Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215
Queensland, Australia
9 posted 2008-11-14 12:31 PM


Awww.. so it is catching, the bug that I've caught.. As I look around, I see I'm not the only sufferer here,smiles.. Maybe the site needs one of those signs..
CAUTION-: Piptalk dot com
          Will hold you captive,
          With creativity
          And cheer!!
Thanks to you all for the fun that we've shared..

suthern
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Posts 20723
Louisiana
10 posted 2008-11-19 03:42 PM


It's definitely an addiction. *S* If you ever doubt that, stick around... and watch what happens when Ron has to shut the forums down for maintenance. LOL

Welcome aboard! *S*

steavenr
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Posts 4058

11 posted 2008-11-19 04:22 PM


clever write...and you have touched on a common theme...at least I feel myself succumbing to the draw of this place...nicely done
Pantheress
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since 2008-11-02
Posts 215
Queensland, Australia
12 posted 2008-11-20 12:44 PM


Thanks S for dropping in, it sure is a great place to be, I love reading everyone's poetry,
Hi steavenr I'm glad you liked my rhyme, I read you'd been off line and not feeling well, I'm glad your back and reading rhymes,smiles..

sewasham
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since 2006-09-11
Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA
13 posted 2008-11-20 08:46 PM


A delightful read. Pip is indeed a special place with a lot of special people. Very nicely done. Take care and Have fun. Steve


Pantheress
Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215
Queensland, Australia
14 posted 2008-11-20 09:24 PM


Thanks Steve for taking the time to reply,smiles.. I'm glad you liked my silly little rhyme.. I'm surprised she keeps popping up,grins.. but do call in again, I love all the beautiful thoughts everyone shares..
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