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mosey and caramel phonebooks |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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those afternoons when you say you are tired but your mind is racing and would I mind messing you up in your way of thinking just to undress the dreams you have and let them run around nude by the windows over the street for just a few hours or longer and did anyone ever get stuck there staying on that side of real time would it go on forever if they did or would it eventually just detour and become a tired afternoon again with your mind racing faster looking for a doorway that was open where you could just walk through slowly and I would be waiting to kiss your eyes ________________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and I would be waiting to kiss your eyes ah yes, Mr Daark.. I think I would like that too!  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks ms r/b. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've known a detour or two...  liking this one...like I like them all.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Pure delight, dear Poet D.! Makes me want to  hop along the corridor ... caramel phonebooks To kiss eyes is magic. Love, Margherita |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
a mind reader you are an open page book am i on warm afternoons. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...you warm me with your smile _______________ ms mar, thanks lady friend for your eyes ________________ ms indi...I knew you would be there....so I waited, thanks babe |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
makes me want a long nap.....and something about curling up in a lap...hmmmm I bet you could make the most frantic of minds melt into stillness |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea...I would do my best to sooth a place in your thoughts...thanks babe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
now this I would love~~ always love the tenderside of you M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs...and I the tender side of you also....thanks babe |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You write this so well. i smile as you leave me thinking. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you ali-san |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
long as you'd be waiting ill keep on coming |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky...ditto babe thanks |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I always adore your poems. And thank you for posting on mine. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
a lovely ending to a thought-provoking write...always a challenge to uncover meaning...always intriguing to try |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
GC..thanks ms _________________ steavenR...thanks guy.. |
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