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Open Poetry #43

Cold Blankets.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2008-11-12 09:43 PM

you told me if you had to marry this young and dumb
it might have just been me
I don't know why you've got to feel the flow like this
the river doesn't have to die at the sea

on a drunken gravel road where even the pebbles dance
to the karaoke beat I tapped for you
we had a life to live, and a story to tell.

you know I wrote it all for you
you're going to feet your plant in desert sand
I know i'd be the best catch you've yet to have caught

this is where the season ends
you've already packed your brains and gone to egypt
but it's a safe bet you'll be coming back

to cold blankets.

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The Sadie Series.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

[This message has been edited by viking_metal (11-14-2008 01:50 AM).]

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2008-11-13 11:49 PM

This is sad.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Pantheress
Member

since 2008-11-02

Posts 215
Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2008-11-14 12:07 PM

Hi.. Another great poem,smiles.. Thanks for sharing this with me..

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

3 posted 2008-11-14 01:35 AM

I think I was drinking when I wrote this.

Because I don't remember putting it up.

There are some simple mistakes that give it away.

Haha!

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2008-11-14 01:39 AM

Thanks very much Juju and pantheress.

It is sort of sad, Sadie made it that way though. A long time ago. Fanks for the compassion, I sure could have used it then.

Pantheress, You're welcome. It's always a treat when you drop by.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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