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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2008-11-12 06:20 PM


Shivers of whispers
Half thought half dreamt left unsaid
No weapon given

No heart to tread on
If you don’t know it is yours
No wounds to inflict

Eyes that cry no more
No pleasures will you gain there
Your words sharp as blades

Watch as this love dies
Bled out from a thousand cuts
From lips meant to kiss

Live with you lonely
Far better to be alone
Than scarred forever

And yet you say you love me

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LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
1 posted 2008-11-12 09:34 PM



Don't give up hope Paula, I wish you luck.

Lindsay

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
2 posted 2008-11-13 11:50 PM


Keep it up

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Pantheress
Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215
Queensland, Australia
3 posted 2008-11-14 12:04 PM


So sad.. So beautiful.. Thank you.
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2008-11-14 04:45 PM


I guess there is all kinds of love~~

M

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