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bradley6
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0 posted 2008-11-12 09:27 AM



My love for you is eternal
Not even death can impede this love
I will always be by your side
Nothing will ever change the feelings I have towards you

And when the time comes that I am no more
I hope that I will remain by your side
And watch you live out the rest of your days
With my spiritual presence that shall bind me to you

You have given me more than I could ever ask
And I am forever grateful that you have always been there
The memories of all the good moments come crashing over me
And I cannot begin to imagine life without you

You have watched me grow and become someone
I have never intended to cause you any pain
And not a day goes by where I don’t think of what could have been
I hope one day you can forgive me of my many faults

© Copyright 2008 bradley6 - All Rights Reserved
americangothic
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since 2008-11-11
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1 posted 2008-11-12 09:50 AM


good effort..you convey your feelings well
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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2 posted 2008-11-12 11:31 AM


This soul-touching write was aptly entitled "Undying Love".

As tears well in my eyes I want to give each of you a warm, compassionate hug...

God bless you both!

Eternal Love & Light,


EA

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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3 posted 2008-11-12 12:46 PM


bradley6 - a most touching write, glad I came by for a read...

BC

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