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corner of corners (scootish) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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knuckles up in some marlboro morning riding metal through a cabin fever sky I don't remember the old days now the new ones are on computers faster than just thinking can do and replaying memories takes time more than my fat round 60 ring bus stop but this bench is a new woman shape with fiberglass curves and quiet makeup except for the four letter words left by the thug bugs with spray paint and the IQ's of shoe laces when wet and streetlights change shirts too often _______________ daark (for OWG) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
OWG is missed m'friend. And your words made me smile. Morning babe. |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
I loved this- the IQ's of shoe laces when wet. I have friends like that,smiles.. Thanks for sharing.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms GS thanks babe. Feels to do the wind again. _____________ Ms Pantha. Thanks so much |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"knuckles up in some marlboro morning riding metal through a cabin fever sky I don't remember the old days now the new ones are on computers faster than just thinking can do and replaying memories takes time" makes me think of early coastal mornings... I sure miss that.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
You dialed it babe. Wish you were to wear em. Thanks |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Love that last picture-love it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Things that happen in too many places. But the originality of your poetic interpretation of this corner of corners is quite exceptional, dear D.! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms nan, thanks so much _______________________ ms mar, thank you for the eyes lady |
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