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On Distant Shores

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Artic Wind
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0 posted 11-08-2008 09:50 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Artic Wind

            

On Distant Shores

~*~

There's something that
really never occurred to me before,
~We belong together

Even when you're
so faraway from land,
on distant shores

~*~
ARCTIC WIND


[This message has been edited by Artic Wind (11-09-2008 11:06 AM).]

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amusemi
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1 posted 11-08-2008 09:54 PM       View Profile for amusemi   Email amusemi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amusemi

I'm avoiding homework, but I'm glad I did.  I remember climbing to the top of a lookout on a pier beside the coast, in some of the blusteriest weather, to sit in the storm and write poetry.  Your picture reminded me of this.  Thank you...kat
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 11-08-2008 11:11 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Michael.. your poetry never fails to move me.. this is beautiful!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
Pilgrimage
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3 posted 11-08-2008 11:12 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

That's the most fantastic photo!  Oh, and I love the poem too.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Marchmadness
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4 posted 11-09-2008 12:10 AM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Nice, Michael. I hope I won't offend you by saying, Did you mean you're instead of your?
                                        Ida
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5 posted 11-09-2008 02:36 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Very nice, Michael.

Alison
2islander2
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by the sea


6 posted 11-09-2008 03:48 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

beacons even are in Montana.

have a nice day

yann
JamesMichael
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7 posted 11-10-2008 08:24 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

A pleasure to read...James
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8 posted 11-10-2008 08:44 PM       View Profile for Pantheress   Email Pantheress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pantheress

Your poem is short and sweet, But the message is very clear, I liked your poem oh so very much.
Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 11-10-2008 09:15 PM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

Yo Artic Wind,

This reminds me of a storm on Barnegat Lighthouse on the Jersey Shore.  Now I wanna go fishing.

Nice work.

Bobby
Oklahoma Rose
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10 posted 11-10-2008 09:21 PM       View Profile for Oklahoma Rose   Email Oklahoma Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Oklahoma Rose

This is so beautiful. You are such a wonderful poet.
Artic Wind
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11 posted 11-10-2008 09:45 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Amusemi!

Storms always inspire me to write poetry, this particular picture inspired me to write this love\spiritual connection write.

Thanks for the reply!


ARCTIC WIND
Artic Wind
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12 posted 11-10-2008 09:46 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Roniece!!!!!! Thank you so much! that was so nice to hear from you, I am happy that you enjoy my writes!

to you
ARCTIC WIND
Artic Wind
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Pilgrimage!

Why thank you! ~ I love this photo too, it's so beautiful... I was lucking to stumble upon it!


ARCTIC WIND
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Marchmadness!

Thanks for helping me Ida!, I am so happy that you pointed that out for me, I didn't notice I made that opsssyyy!


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Alison!

Thanks


ARCTIC WIND
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Islander!

LOL Thanks


ARCTIC WIND
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JamesMichael!

Thanks so much


ARCTIC WIND
Artic Wind
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Pantheress,

Welcome to Pip once again, and thank you so much for enjoying my poem! Glad you're liking it here at the warm and friendly Pip!


ARCTIC WIND
Artic Wind
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19 posted 11-10-2008 09:54 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Bobby!

Thank for replying, and yes I love storms, but safe ones of course!


ARCTIC WIND
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Oklahoma Rose!

Thanks so much, I really enjoy your poetry as well!


ARCTIC WIND
Earth Angel
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21 posted 11-11-2008 03:20 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

"We belong together" ~

The entire poem has a nice, introspective feel to it.


EA
Artic Wind
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22 posted 11-11-2008 03:23 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

EA~

Thanks so much for that WONDERFUL! reply...

to you
ARCTIC WIND
Ceinwyn
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23 posted 11-11-2008 04:19 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ceinwyn

This reminds of a song called "We Belong Together" from Tristan and Isolde... this was beautiful

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

Bill Charles
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24 posted 11-11-2008 11:28 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Artic Wind - I love lighthouses, and this write is special. Thank you for writing it.

BC
 
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