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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2008-11-08 09:50 PM


            

On Distant Shores

~*~

There's something that
really never occurred to me before,
~We belong together

Even when you're
so faraway from land,
on distant shores

~*~
ARCTIC WIND


[This message has been edited by Artic Wind (11-09-2008 11:06 AM).]

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amusemi
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1 posted 2008-11-08 09:54 PM


I'm avoiding homework, but I'm glad I did.  I remember climbing to the top of a lookout on a pier beside the coast, in some of the blusteriest weather, to sit in the storm and write poetry.  Your picture reminded me of this.  Thank you...kat
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-11-08 11:11 PM


Michael.. your poetry never fails to move me.. this is beautiful!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2008-11-08 11:12 PM


That's the most fantastic photo!  Oh, and I love the poem too.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2008-11-09 12:10 PM


Nice, Michael. I hope I won't offend you by saying, Did you mean you're instead of your?
                                        Ida

Alison
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5 posted 2008-11-09 02:36 AM


Very nice, Michael.

Alison

2islander2
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by the sea
6 posted 2008-11-09 03:48 AM


beacons even are in Montana.

have a nice day

yann

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2008-11-10 08:24 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Pantheress
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8 posted 2008-11-10 08:44 PM


Your poem is short and sweet, But the message is very clear, I liked your poem oh so very much.
Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2008-11-10 09:15 PM


Yo Artic Wind,

This reminds me of a storm on Barnegat Lighthouse on the Jersey Shore.  Now I wanna go fishing.

Nice work.

Bobby

Oklahoma Rose
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10 posted 2008-11-10 09:21 PM


This is so beautiful. You are such a wonderful poet.
Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-11-10 09:45 PM


Amusemi!

Storms always inspire me to write poetry, this particular picture inspired me to write this love\spiritual connection write.

Thanks for the reply!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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12 posted 2008-11-10 09:46 PM


Roniece!!!!!! Thank you so much! that was so nice to hear from you, I am happy that you enjoy my writes!

to you
ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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13 posted 2008-11-10 09:48 PM


Pilgrimage!

Why thank you! ~ I love this photo too, it's so beautiful... I was lucking to stumble upon it!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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14 posted 2008-11-10 09:49 PM


Marchmadness!

Thanks for helping me Ida!, I am so happy that you pointed that out for me, I didn't notice I made that opsssyyy!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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15 posted 2008-11-10 09:50 PM


Alison!

Thanks


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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16 posted 2008-11-10 09:51 PM


Islander!

LOL Thanks


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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17 posted 2008-11-10 09:51 PM


JamesMichael!

Thanks so much


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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18 posted 2008-11-10 09:53 PM


Pantheress,

Welcome to Pip once again, and thank you so much for enjoying my poem! Glad you're liking it here at the warm and friendly Pip!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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19 posted 2008-11-10 09:54 PM


Bobby!

Thank for replying, and yes I love storms, but safe ones of course!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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20 posted 2008-11-10 09:55 PM


Oklahoma Rose!

Thanks so much, I really enjoy your poetry as well!


ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2008-11-11 03:20 PM


"We belong together" ~

The entire poem has a nice, introspective feel to it.


EA

Artic Wind
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22 posted 2008-11-11 03:23 PM


EA~

Thanks so much for that WONDERFUL! reply...

to you
ARCTIC WIND

Ceinwyn
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23 posted 2008-11-11 04:19 PM


This reminds of a song called "We Belong Together" from Tristan and Isolde... this was beautiful

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
24 posted 2008-11-11 11:28 PM


Artic Wind - I love lighthouses, and this write is special. Thank you for writing it.

BC

Margherita
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Eternity
25 posted 2008-11-12 06:17 AM


Dear Michael, I feel your heart's motion and emotion in this one! It's so powerful and I love the beacons too ... they guide the ships, as the hearts guide our choices.

Enjoyed this much, my beautiful young poet.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
26 posted 2008-11-12 06:37 PM


Very nice penned, enjoyed your words very much

Charisma

LindsayP
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27 posted 2008-11-12 08:51 PM



Michael that is one cute poem.

Thank you.

Lindsay

LindsayP
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28 posted 2008-11-12 08:52 PM



Michael that is one cute poem.

Thank you.

Lindsay

Artic Wind
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29 posted 2008-11-13 03:34 PM


Ceinwyn!

Thanks a lot!!!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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30 posted 2008-11-13 03:35 PM


Bill Charles!

Thanks! ~ I really like this picture too!!!! I was so happy to find it


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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31 posted 2008-11-13 03:36 PM


Margherita!!!

LOL thanks so much! I am so happy that you enjoyed my poem, it means a lot

to you
ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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32 posted 2008-11-13 03:37 PM


Charisma

Thanks dear poetess!!!! ~ I am so happy that you liked it


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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33 posted 2008-11-13 03:37 PM


Lindsay!

Thanks


ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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34 posted 2008-11-13 03:47 PM


I came back to enjoy your thoughts again and to save that graphic, if you don't mind! You have a knack for choosing the perfect pics to accompany your poems!

Love
EA

Artic Wind
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35 posted 2008-11-13 03:50 PM


EA!!!

WOW thanks for replying! thank so much! Definitely, you love the picture, go ahead and save it!

to you
ARCTIC WIND

inkedgoddess
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36 posted 2008-11-13 04:31 PM


somehow when someone means something
shorelines erase in the distance
very nice here

Artic Wind
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37 posted 2008-11-15 11:51 AM


InkedGoddess!

Thanks so much!!!


ARCTIC WIND

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
38 posted 2008-11-15 05:39 PM


bitter sweet.. sigh*
Artic Wind
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39 posted 2008-11-15 07:15 PM


Dark Star!

Thanks so much!!!!


ARCTIC WIND

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
40 posted 2008-11-15 07:17 PM


bitter sweet.. sigh*
Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
41 posted 2008-11-15 07:18 PM


sorry, i just realized I've replied 3 times, i've been having this problem. oh well, i say "bitter sweet" again
star

Artic Wind
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42 posted 2009-09-04 05:25 PM


People seem to have this problem a lot. Three times a charm lol


ARCTIC WIND

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