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bradley6 New Member
since 2008-11-08
Posts 7 |
Decisions and thoughts are consuming the mind The feeling is no longer there Control is what I need But I’ve done too much to come back. Give me something I want but I know you won’t My best is never enough I need some kind of sign But there is just so much i can’t turn back. The anxiety is just to much to bear I tell myself to live without a care I’m not like them, because I don’t like them I want to go back. Home is where I want to be But it’s not going to ever be the same This isn’t how I envisioned it Please just let me go back. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome, Bradley, to Pip! The pain is felt in your poem, you convey your anxiety very well. There is no return, you can only live in the now and try to BE love. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
That's a tough place to be. Welcome. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Sad Write indeed... WELCOME TO PIP!   ARCTIC WIND |
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