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Honeybunch
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0 posted 2008-11-08 03:25 AM


I dreamt in the days before love took form
and proceeded to break and shatter them all
and they litter the floor still awaiting a bend
in acknowledgement of the now state of them.

Tomorrow perhaps when the body undone
from the bone and muscle that keeps it upright
the pieces that lie at the base of a life
will be as dust discarded and gone.  

And then, and then, no need to bend
and a woman, a man, can know of no trial
that forced them to kneel and sweep to the side
the broken and shattered dreams of the time.

They lie silent and seemingly dead to the turn
of one who now knows to overstep love
but always a step too large for the frame
can topple a steadfast and steady resolve.

Knowing that, knowing that, it’s like I can be
a bubble that floats ever nonchalantly
above the now shattered and spent
many, so many, remembered dreams.

But bubbles … oh, damn, they’re so very fragile
and  don’t know how to align themselves
with steel inlaid concreted balls
that roll over love as if not even there.

And the drawing board calls to creative endeavour
but I know I’m the board, the creative, and all
that ensures safe passage over shattered dreams!

Helen / 8 November 2008



© Copyright 2008 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2008-11-08 07:01 AM


Oh, dear Helen, you write so well, but you need to dream on ... no need to put the shattered dreams together and mend them, there are NEW ones you can create RIGHT NOW.

Let go, break out of the fragile bubbles and breathe in the now, stronger than ever.

I know that you know how you do that.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2008-11-08 07:13 AM


  Thanks, dear Margherita.  Yes, I know how and I am doing it but it's my birthday today and there's a sadness (amongst the joy) for all that could have been but wasn't.  We soldier on nevertheless but I think rather to "party" on tonight at least for me.

Lots of love
Helen

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-11-08 07:31 AM


Oh, yes, dear Helen, do enjoy your birthday and celebrate the beauty of you!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR HELEN!

You know I have quite a few Scorpio friends and now I know that this is a further reason why I feel so close to you.

May divine blessings shower you abundantly today and always.

Make it a new start, detach from the past pains and step into new territory of infinite possibilities.

Listen to your favorite music and let sadness dissolve!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2008-11-08 08:00 AM


Bubbles are always chased
destined to be erased
anyhow
Your words are potent

Honeybunch
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5 posted 2008-11-08 08:07 AM


Oh, yes, dear Margherita, Scorpios are ... um ... wonderful - a bit intense but wonderful nevertheless!  

Thanks so much for your wishes.  My new year has started off very well but still there are corners and bends that I wish I had taken or had been taken around.  Next lifetime perhaps -


Helen

Honeybunch
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6 posted 2008-11-08 08:11 AM


Inkedgoddess - thank you.  Yes, we're all bubbles destined to be erased sooner or later and perhaps too of love.  It doesn't pay, I guess, to take anything too seriously because, as they say, this too shall pass.

Love
Helen

Margherita
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7 posted 2008-11-08 04:18 PM


I do hope you are dancing now and enjoying your birthday party, dear Helen!

Love,
Margherita



Honeybunch
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8 posted 2008-11-08 05:07 PM


Nope, no dancing but the music certainly moved me.  Lots of things move me and yet I'm still here doing what I do ... like writing stories.  


Helen

Artic Wind
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9 posted 2008-11-08 05:32 PM


HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY HELEN!!!!

May all your wishes come true on your special day!!

to you
ARCTIC WIND

Honeybunch
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10 posted 2008-11-08 06:00 PM


Thank you so much, AC!  I know my wishes will come true.  It may take a million years but they do say that time is an illusion.  

Helen

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