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A Long Kiss
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A Long Kiss |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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A Long Kiss A long kiss on the lips, with love around you, like gentle touching blossoms soft and wet, is filled with a nectar to drug and blind you bringing glowing hypnotic waves from the chest. A long kiss savoured is insanity flavored, a craving for dreamers to taste the prize of yeilding hearts sending all human reason adrift in circles of love through the mind. A long kiss speaks, but not words you can conquer. A long kiss sings, but not songs you can sing. A long kiss sails on the windsongs of matter caught up in the flight of an alien on wing. A long kiss can torch your heart to continue burning with fire long after it's over a flame left roaring deep within you a molten addiction invading the sober. A long kiss can heal diminished duende, a soothing connection for those sharing gifts, and truth or pretense for a few precious moments there's time to enjoy true love as you wish. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ethome - your romantic writings are well, great romantic writings, always enjoy reading them. And to write all this about a kiss, is just well, even more romantic... BC |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Hi darling man, I’ve missed your writing so much. This is positively delicious, and makes me want to pucker up. Still, darling man you always did have the ability to write words that made pulses quicken and breath catch in throats didn’t you? Mmmmmm indeed you do. Take care dear friend, look after yourself as always Mushy x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Romantic Write indeed!~  ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Ethome, This is very good work, and I like it. Thanks for teaching me a new word “duende”. I think it should be “yielding”, not “yielding”. Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks to all for the nice replies......and for the spell check, that's much appreciated too!....LOL! Eric |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Very romantic on a snowy night. Who doesn't love a long kiss - and you write of it so well. Alison |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now I'm hankering for a looooong kiss! Where are soft, wet lips filled with nectar, when I need them?!? ~ A pleasure to read! Divine in the experiencing!   Linda |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
A long kiss can speak volumes, and sure enough light that fire. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss. *S* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I do believe the "guitar man" knows AND feels the nuances of life. You write it well as always and as always, a pleasure to read you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Once again thanks all for the wonderful encouraging comments and for taking the time out of your busy day to read this piece. Eric IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"yeilding hearts sending all human reason adrift in circles of love through the mind" imho, your most apt description of the effects of such a kiss--well done...excellent writing |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
A long kiss speaks, but not words you can conquer. A long kiss sings, but not songs you can sing. this is very beautiful yann |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"A long kiss can torch your heart to continue burning with fire long after it's over a flame left roaring deep within you a molten addiction invading the sober." could not agree more!  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Eric..sweet poet man..I have missed your kiss...beautiful so beautiful |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
A long kiss sails on the windsongs of matter caught up in the flight of an alien on wing. A long kiss can torch your heart to continue burning with fire long after it's over a flame left roaring deep within you \ Wow its so beautifully written and the imagery is so sweet! This is a really good write! Rhia |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Steavenr & James I appreciate the visit and the words quoted. Take care Eric |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
I loved this verse my friend you wrote it so well, much applause. Lindsay |
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