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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2008-11-07 01:39 PM


Flowers left on a
park bench, a remembrance
of life and love.
They are seen, appreciated
by the person they
were meant for, though
they no longer walk
with the living. Still
they bend to inhale
the scent that transcends
time, their beauty moves
them, their feeling hearts
ache, from a parallel
world of life lived
in perfection and filled
with everlasting peaceful joy.


Love is to think about someone else more times in a day than you think of yourself...Anon.

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2008-11-07 02:56 PM


most of the (alleged) 'living' seem to 'crawl' rather than 'walk' ...

a lovely 'penning' about a fine parallel fantasy though!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2008-11-07 07:16 PM


Inhaling the scent of this, the transcendent timelessness of the spirit.
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2008-11-07 07:21 PM


Goldenrose - nice writing, enjoyed your work here...

BC

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-11-07 08:03 PM


Enjoyed the Write!


ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-11-07 11:23 PM


oh this is truly a beautiful gifting Phil.. so good to read you again my friend!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2008-11-09 10:11 PM


This is so very beautiful, Phil. Excellent.
                                     Ida

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