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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2008-11-07 10:51 AM


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The crowd moves
Toward another ride

Not that gravity
As well has somehow
Changed

Yet hype about
It being new
Seems adequate
For a need

The line stretches
It seems for miles
And it will be awhile
Before it fades

It’s been said
More than once
My hopeful friend

Enough
Times at last
For you to learn

To be adult
Is to be alone


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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
1 posted 2008-11-07 12:01 PM


Thank you for the thoughtful poem....I think sometimes we are alone because there are people around us....Disney land has to be with kids...

best wishes

  yann

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