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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. One Black squirrel A small bird Or two And yellow Leaves Falling And a blue ball Gliding Floating Bound For where It has no idea Under An iron bridge . |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
sometimes I feel like I try to overthink your writes...this one is like a glimpse into a moment of time in your world... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful John! Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
another fine impression! applause!! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
More beautiful and memorable than any brush-stroke painting/photograph that could have been created of this special moment. - Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I just like to enjoy the way you see the world. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I really love the construction of the poem and the stanzas which answer each other, your work is attractive and efficient...very enjoyable read. yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful scenery! Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write!!  ARCTIC WIND |
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