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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Behind the deep red foil a little chocolate Dove promise tells me to “keep my plans secret for now” but how can I? When this, my own smile exhibits to the world all the love my heart holds for you. © KRJ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
nice and lovely, very enjoyable to read. yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I bet your eyes reveal your secret very graciously, as does this little gem of a poem, dear Karilea! "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
this was a delicious secret  Ohh I do love dove promises, it reminds me of my Grandmother....The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am a "salty-kind-of-girl" and probably a good thing  Cute! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So am I, Mys...except for that lovely dark chocolate... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Just beautiful and filled with so much love my friend, very much enjoyed. Rick |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
chocolate is the universal language, you know...enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Oh how I love that chocolate. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Purty cool! You should post more often. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is wonderful, Sunnyshine. Even though I no longer believe in secrets - I am smiling at the wonderfulness of this poem. Love, Alison |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiling~ at the tease M |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Mmmmmm! Chocolate . . . of any kind . . . is ch-o-c-o-l-a-t-e! And what a delightful gem of a poem! - Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Dark chocolate is my favorite. Sweet little poem, Karilea. Ida |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Smiling here cause I read those Dove wrappers, too. I know this poem to be true of you--Miss Sunshiny Smile! Your brighten the world. Bridget |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - a special poem for a special person... BC |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
subtle and succinctly fine in effect (like the chocolate) applause for this 'penning'! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Chocolate and secrets... Two of my favorite things. Bet that secret looks good on you MommaK. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Intimate and sweet all in the same package.....Good to read your words again.... Eric |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling heart Do you know how special this is? I hope so. I’ve missed you sweet one, but these days I cannot get into PiP’s very often and even less time to leave my little pink footprints over the pages. I don’t have the time anymore to play, and even less to fill my soul with the drops of joy that are scattered here like petals from a rose. Love the writing, it is simply beautiful Take care dear friend, look after yourself as always Mushy x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I can eat some Chocolate right now! LOL I mean, I always can eat some chocolate~ Enjoyed the Write ~Most Sunny Karilea ~~  ARCTIC WIND |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Want a Hershey kiss??  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Sunshine, Here, all along I thought "Dove" was a soap. It just goes to show what I know. Bobby |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Me too, Bobby. - Owl |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
My Dear Sunshine Thanks for your thread that was add'd by your pen and i hope to see more from u Best regards and Good day Nourzihane |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
That a great concept that I can applaud,smiles.. Well written |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
simply beautiful Karilea!!! love and hugs RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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