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The sweetest thing
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The sweetest thing |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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You are the seed on which I feed The bud which grows from beauties touch The blossom that assures there’s hope The flower filled with all so much You fill my breath with sent so sweet You give my eyes a sight to hold My heart the passion in its beat And blessings yet of never told You are the spark of fires need The water when there’s need to quell The food abundant when I feed The thoughts I share when time to tell You are my wish and dream afar My hope when I have nothing more The sweetest thing, that’s what you are And what till end, I shall adore |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Rick... You are... so wonderful in your expression of her...... lovely, lovely, lovely my friend..... RDB xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, wonderful to get your reply my friend, thank you so much for the visit and words. Rick |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
That's the way every woman should feel when loved~~ M |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Awwww, what a beautiful love poem. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
nakdthoughts, nice to see you here today my friend, thank you so much for your visit and comment, always enjoyed. Oklahoma Rose, glad you liked it my friend, thank you for the read and comment. To you both my friends, thank you so much. Rick |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's always a pleasure to read you; sometimes I think I can hear your Aussie voice come across the web.   |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Such a beautiful piece from such a wonderful writer. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice...the object of your affection should be thankful for your eloquence |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Loving feelings so beautifully expressed Hope |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sunshine, I love getting your replies,and it is nice to know your hearing is so good, I have called out once or twice, might save the fingers from the keyboard for a while lol. You have a great day and take care. Rick |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
James, thanks for the visit and reply, always very much appreciated. Rick |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
RevengeIsMine, I am glad I could share something that you liked, thank you for reading the words and sharing your thoughts, much apprecaited. Rick |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
steavenr, alas, often the ones you care about have no idea, it is nice just to share thoughts with my friends of what my heart can speak. Thanks for your reply. Rick |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Hope, thank you for visiting once again my friend and sharing your thoughts, have a wonderful day and take care. Rick. |
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