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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2008-11-03 10:12 PM



           

Autumn Falls

As I sit on my window sill ~ looking out,
I feel the cool autumn breeze
that blows through the naked trees.

The rushing sound of water,
as it crashes against the river rocks,
echoes throughout my home

The last autumn leaves slowly descend
to the dampened earth below,
~ leaving the trees fruitless and bare.

The transformation of clouds
into a deep and dismal grey,
is a sign of changing seasons.

~ Winter approaches...

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1 posted 2008-11-03 10:25 PM


Brother, hand me a cup of hot chocolate and let me curl up with that cat will you?  What a splendiferous view and poem.  Loved this entire setting.
Artic Wind
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2 posted 2008-11-03 10:27 PM


Mysteria!

~Of course you may, enjoy watching as fall takes it's last breath away with beauty as winter slowly creeps in with it's unbelievable scenery and glowing crystal snow!

Thanks for reading the poem, Titia really inspired me... a lot!

Huggies!
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Bill Charles
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3 posted 2008-11-04 12:18 PM


Artic Wind - would love a cup of coffee also. I can imagine sitting at that window enjoying the view. Nice, very nice...

BC

Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2008-11-04 05:59 AM


Oh what a beautiful scenery you have to look at. Thank you so much for this marvellous ode to autumn, I really enjoyed the read and view.

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Margherita
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5 posted 2008-11-04 06:53 AM


Absolutely delightful, dear Michael! I really want to linger there too with the cat and taking in the beauty of these fall moments.

Perfectly met challenge!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Oklahoma Rose
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6 posted 2008-11-04 09:14 AM


I love the view you have given her. Autumn is my favorite time of year.
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2008-11-09 02:21 PM


Oh, such a serene picture you paint with your
picturesque words.

Thanks, AW! I needed that! I enjoyed the view!

Warm autumnal hugs,
EA

Midnitesun
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8 posted 2008-11-09 03:40 PM


You'd never get me to leave that windowsill!
Gorgeous write and photo, dear AW.

Artic Wind
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9 posted 2008-11-11 04:10 PM


Bill Charles!

Thanks so much, a nice warm coffee coming your way~


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Artic Wind
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10 posted 2008-11-11 04:11 PM


Titia!

You are most welcome! ~ I am happy that you created that thread and I am most happy that you enjoyed my view\poem LOL


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Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-11-11 04:12 PM


Oklahoma Rose!

I love Autumn, but I LOVE winter... Winter is so full of beauty and fresh air mmhhmm! Lovely

Thanks for the reply!


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Artic Wind
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12 posted 2008-11-11 04:13 PM


Margherita! LOL

Of course you may lay with the cat and relax, watching the view as it turns slowly to the freezey Winter season... ouuuu


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Artic Wind
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13 posted 2008-11-11 04:14 PM


EA!

Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed my poem...


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Artic Wind
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14 posted 2008-11-11 04:14 PM


Midnitesun!

Thanks dearest Kacy! ~ Happy that you liked it


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