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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2008-11-03 03:04 PM


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So here we are—
You and I again

Going down
The same road

Somehow
I knew
You'd wait
For me

Detoured
As I was
By an old cause

Another
November sea
Rolls upon the shore

The year’s
Last leaves
Falling
From the trees

It’s good
To be back
Where I belong

And far away
From then


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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2008-11-03 03:17 PM


comforting
steavenr
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2 posted 2008-11-03 03:59 PM


makes you want to break out in a big smile and soft wish congratulations...nicely written
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2008-11-03 04:43 PM


Huan Yi - nice write...

BC

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
4 posted 2008-11-04 12:56 PM


most effective ... VERY well done!

fine 'write' ... serious applause!!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-11-05 06:36 AM


wonderful!!! it was lovely to read this John..

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
6 posted 2008-11-07 04:24 PM


I just wanted to 'revisit' this one!

continuing applause!!

OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa
7 posted 2008-11-08 12:56 PM


Reassuring.  It is good to see an almost-smile on your face.

- Owl

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