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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-11-02 09:16 PM


Distinct Atmosphere

Standing in a bamboo
forest things seemed
different in my day.

Within the serenity
of the forest a peace
came upon me
and my cares
faded away.

The wind
so gently
caressing
the trees.
The ambience
so sweet in
embrace of me.

JamesLee
02November
2008


[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (11-04-2008 06:19 PM).]

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steavenr
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1 posted 2008-11-02 09:31 PM


wow...this captures a place as exotic as the mind can conjure up...its simplicity adds levels to its complexity
Alison
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2 posted 2008-11-02 09:31 PM


This is what I love about your poetry.

xoxoxo
Alison

2islander2
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3 posted 2008-11-03 11:07 AM


efficiency touch its goal, thank you for sharing lovely words.

  yann

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2008-11-03 03:10 PM


Very nice.
       Ida

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2008-11-03 04:38 PM


JamesMichael - I can identify with the place in this write. Nicely done...

BC

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-11-05 04:48 AM


beautifully expressed my dear friend James
love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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7 posted 2008-11-05 12:08 PM


nice
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