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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-11-02 08:33 PM


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Maybe
We should
Go forward

Giving all
For what is right

Or maybe not
I said

Which then
Saved a life


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1 posted 2008-11-02 08:39 PM


Maybe before
we can go forward
and do what is right

we have to learn
from what we have left
behind

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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2 posted 2008-11-03 04:42 PM


it's fate! ~it's funny how it works, huh?


ARCTIC WIND

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2008-11-06 03:32 PM


Enigmatic - and with a surprise ending!  I would love to hear the story behind this.

- Owl

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