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Freely_expressing
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0 posted 2008-11-02 10:07 AM


What is this thing we call emotion?
Mysterious language of the soul
A blinding, burning, boundless ocean
That leaves us fast without control
You cannot stem this endless tide
The rise and fall, the hate and pride

It swells with every lovers kiss
Crests high with each new joy
It burns brightly for the ones you miss
Common sense soon destroyed
Reason falls when facing hate
This emotion does but desecrate

Anger, fear, lust and distrust
Dark as nights with shadowed moons
Hard to resist and yet we must
The call of their deceiving tune
These emotions only bear us down
In their lying grasp we slowly drown

Happiness, faith and forgiveness
Like newborn babes, do not beguile
Instead by simple goodness bless
Convey them with a heartfelt smile
A single word could heal the pain
And cleanse deeper than the purest rain

So now the darkness is explored
And the boundless ocean confined
Into the shape of a two edged sword
One side leaves only fear behind
The other can heal broken lives
It’s your choice alone which kind survives



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Janette
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1 posted 2008-11-02 10:35 AM


"The call of their deceiving tune"

Yes, one must try to resist this call.


Janette

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steavenr
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2 posted 2008-11-03 04:09 PM


good write...nice thoughts:

"One side leaves only fear behind
The other can heal broken lives
It’s your choice alone which kind survives"

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2008-11-03 04:41 PM


Freely_expressing - emotions are good, yet can be most cunning doing strange things...

BC

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