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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-11-01 09:09 PM


It’s cold and pouring rain.  

Bones is in the street,
and he’s soaked.  

He has nowhere to go.  

He wishes he were dead.  

He knows he’d go to heaven,
because he’s never hurt anyone.  

It would be nice and warm up there.

Bobby

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viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
1 posted 2008-11-01 09:12 PM


I'd give bones a poncho, if I owned one.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-11-01 09:22 PM


Thanks Viking_metal (Paul),

For your very generous thought on Bones behalf.  I’m sure you would gladly give a poncho to him.  I think many people would, most especially people that have found themselves in similar trouble.  As you know, it can be awful out there.

I hope you get a ponco soon.

Bobby

chopsticks
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since 2007-10-02
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The US,
3 posted 2008-11-02 06:57 AM


If I was in charge, I would send Bones on to heaven . He wouldn’t need a poncho there, just them

golden slippers .



Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2008-11-02 07:00 AM


oh no, I sure don't wish Bones was dead! I would look after him Bobby that's for sure...

love and hugs to Bones ...  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2008-11-02 10:12 AM


Thanks dear Chopsticks,

Bones loves those golden slippers.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 posted 2008-11-02 10:14 AM


Thanks dear RDB,

Bones knows you would look after him.  He says your a nice lady.  He sends you loads of hugs back.

Love Bobby

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2008-11-04 06:35 PM


Fine writing...James
Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
8 posted 2008-11-04 06:52 PM


Thanks James,

I'm pleased you liked the poem.

Bobby

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