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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-11-01 01:43 PM





I Keep On Keeping On

I do have the patience
Somehow I find the time
As I pour heart and soul
Into yet another rhyme

I believe in possibilities
Knowing its all up to me
Assurance I give myself
It's the only way to be

I also find persistence
As I keep on keeping on
It's a new day tomorrow
With yesterday gone

I am able to persevere
Having the coping ability
As I journey through life
I shall keep being me


HopeĀ©2008

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Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2008-11-01 01:54 PM


Not only beautifully constructed but very positive in it's content.  Keep being you and I will keep reading each time you rhyme and even when you don't.  Wonderful read.
Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2008-11-01 04:19 PM


Yo dear HopeS,

This is a beautiful poem.  I'm sure it is true, and I want you to keep doing it.

Love Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2008-11-01 07:46 PM


Hope... this is a very beautiful and positive poem... as lovely as you... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

steavenr
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Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-11-01 08:05 PM


not just a great message, but nice form, and hope permeating each line...love the optimism found in your words
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-11-02 11:29 AM


A beauty HopeS!


ARCTIC WIND

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